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All Deviations
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Learning Just To Be

Life isn't easy.
It's hard when you feel all alone.
You've got to have someone to lean on...
Something to believe in.


I've found my drug in you.
Satisfied by what you allow me to have.
You're both good and bad for me...
For some reason you got what I need.


We've become something...
Not quite sure what.
But figuring it out isn't important.
If we worry, it's sure to all fall apart.


You've taught me to ignore tomorrow...
All that matters is right now.
You said don't worry about the end... if it comes.
Nothing else matters in this world we're created...
We're who and what we want to be.

I don't wait for the sky to clear anymore.
I've learned to love the rain...
And I always will.
©2006-2008 ~Dreaming-in-Red
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Author's Comments

"The Every Where of Life" entry.

This poem sort of belongs in a series with some other poems by themselves... they kind of go hand in hand because the subject of the matter revolves around the same relationship. But just for fun I'll let you the reader figure out what poems those are.

As for this particular poem, it's says everything so no explination is needed, plus I enjoy letting my readers decide for themselves what the words may or may not be saying.



Enjoy and review!
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~YamiRachael:iconYamiRachael: Aug 5, 2006, 1:46:55 PM
<3 I really like it! Your poetry gots emotions from deep down I love that! Fave! <33 Keep your good words up! ^^
much love
-Reemii <3

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"If I can't say retart or E-tart than what can I call you Marlee! A POPTART?" Me
"...Yeah." Marlee
"--U Ya know you are a goddamn poptart." Me
"^-^ Weee. Crap CIVICS!-runs like hell to room 207-" Marlee
"O.o ...--U Poptart." Me
~Dreaming-in-Red:iconDreaming-in-Red: Aug 5, 2006, 5:29:05 PM
Awww many thanks and many more for the fav.

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Mistress of Mayhem
Redhead with Attitude
~YamiRachael:iconYamiRachael: Aug 5, 2006, 6:06:12 PM
welcomez! <33
much love
-Reemii <3

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"If I can't say retart or E-tart than what can I call you Marlee! A POPTART?" Me
"...Yeah." Marlee
"--U Ya know you are a goddamn poptart." Me
"^-^ Weee. Crap CIVICS!-runs like hell to room 207-" Marlee
"O.o ...--U Poptart." Me
~insanity-streak:iconinsanity-streak: Aug 8, 2006, 5:14:45 AM
the emotion in this poem is really coming through. the rythmn is very different, but not in a bad way- it works. i like your use of 5 lines in the second last stanza sort of brings it to a conclusions nicely, sums it up and then moves onto the fil one :)

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Buffy: Angel
Angel: Buffy
Xander: Xander
~Dreaming-in-Red:iconDreaming-in-Red: Aug 8, 2006, 12:53:24 PM
Thank you, and I was worried about the ending line because of the different rythmn of the poem. Glad it worked out. *breathes a sigh of relief*

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Mistress of Mayhem
Redhead with Attitude
~Dreaming-in-Red:iconDreaming-in-Red: Aug 8, 2006, 12:54:12 PM
Thank you, and I was worried about the ending line because of the different rythmn of the poem. Glad it worked out. *breathes a sigh of relief*

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Mistress of Mayhem
Redhead with Attitude